my rap 2 be ranked

[Jblack20]

ight this is my rap i want to be rank on im going fo a lightweight spot or rookie because thats wat i am ight.

The only thing I fear is god himself/Fuck'n wit M-phaze that bad fo yo health(That right)/Got my fatigue and my tims on/Bandana wrapped around my head niggaz it on/It would take 5 of yall to try to harm me/Nigga go to tha army and be all u can be/You will neva be like me or my nigga J Fels/WE be deliverin them shell like we givin out tha mail/And we piss'n on yall nigga like we were R kels/You walk'n round this bitch like u standing tuff/I have yo azz leakin like tha time of tha month/When I fuck a nigga up i have no remore/Fuck talkin nigga i declare war/I'll show yall i can b gangsta to tha core/An all my nigga runnin up in yo bitch like she was a hoe 1

[GoldSoulja]

ima have to go wit rookie, but seeing as ther isnt that lvl ima have to say light
no offence, here are sum comments
the operner i think wuz the best part of it all but the closer wuz crap ur rhymes cud use sum improvement but the flow wuz pretty good chek out Tipz and ull b elevatin in kno time

[yukmouth]

rokkie but nice rap

[GoldSoulja]

i guess ill make a rookie lvl

[yukmouth]

wut am i?

[Jblack20]

ight yall thank rookies is fine wit me but i really make songs and shit ppl should get a label started on hear

[mussolini]

i say lightweight or rookie